Ms. Kristy's homework.
Justice is a big word and means a lot for me. We can't live without justice, because justice is like a pilar, that protects us againts all the bad things. Justice never stop, day and night fights for the good reasons and for the good things. All the people that are involve, work so hard just to make it much better.
Justice is in everywhere, I can do bad things and then run away, but sooner or later justice will be there for me. I think that's why I love to watch accion movies, or those movies where the the law [justice] always plays a role. In those movies, the bad guys do a lot bad things and then run away but later on they got cought.
The same happens in the real life, I had heard in the radio, watched in the TV, readed on the newspapers, and told by others people about all the bad guys and all the bad things that are happening in this world. But I think, that sooner or later justice will be there for just to make the right think.
When a mother take cares of all her children, I think justice does the same think, it take cares of its all people. This is what justice means for me too. I can say that justice is an act of courage and it is made it for the good people. For those persons who still believe in it, for those persons who really wants a a better world and a better future.
In conclusion, I can say that I'm one of those persons that still believe in justice, because I still believe in a better life and a better world. And I still believe too, in those persons who work so hard for just to make the justice much better. Justice is a very good reason reason and very important for me, because without it, this world would be more dangerous than it is now.
Friday, July 16, 2010
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Hi Alfredo,
ReplyDeleteWhat bad things does justice protect you against? Try to be really specific.
Also make sure that your verbs are correct. In sentence+
two, you have 'justice' and 'stop' together. Fix 'stop' I also see this same error in other places. Check your rules for third person verb conjugation.
I really like your ideas here, Alfredo. Make these changes and then I will regrade your work.
7/10
:-) kristi