Ms Kristy's homework.
The July 4th is an special day for the USA, and for me, I can tell that it is special too. I've been in the USA for 9 years, and my experience from this holiday, it has been nice because during all this time I had learned how the american people celebrates the July 4th.
For me, the July 4th means an special day, even when I don't know much about this event. It is an special day because first of all, I feel that I'm part of it, secondly because I like all the events from this holiday; fireworks, barbecue, parties, picnics, etc, and the most it is an special day because every July 4th, I got the day off, and I got pay for this day.
What I do is to go a picnic with all my friends, and we celebrate it with barbecue, beers, and of course with mexican food. After the picnic at night, we just start with the fireworks.
Well, I don't know much about July 4th, but I did my research and I foud it from: Wikipedia The Free Encyclopedia.
In the United States, Indepence Day, commonly known as the Fourth of July, is a federal holiday commemorating the adoption of the Declaration of Independence on July 4th, 1776, declaring independence from the Kingdom of Great Britain. Independence Day is commonly associate with fireworks, parades, barbecues, carnivals, fairs, picnics, concerts, baseball games, political speeches and ceremonies, and various other public and private events celebrating the history, goverment, and traditions of the United States. Independence Day is the national day of the United States.
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Hello Alfredo!
ReplyDeleteHow are you? I am doing well!
Here is what I think about your paragraph.
First, you have way too many commas. You need to break this up and add some periods.
After holiday (in the first paragraph) you need a : You use a colon when you want to list things.
Good job on the research! Fix this and get it back to me. When you do, I'll change your grade.
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