Wednesday, July 7, 2010

DISCUSSION QUESTION 1

MS ROSEMARY'S HOMEWORK.

I can say that my childhood was very nice, my parents took care of me with all their love. They were with me all the time, and they treated me in the best way. Of course that they had a rules on me. Everytime that I was doing something wrong, or something that they command me without doing it, or everytime that I was breaking any of their rules, they just punished me. I can remember that after any punishment they just talked to me and explained to me that I did it wasn't correct. I have a lovely parents, but of course that everytime that I brake their rules, they will be there with a new punishment.

1 comment:

  1. You write well Alfredo and you have clearly explained your circumstances of your childhood. Just remember that you do not need to use an article for plural words: 'they had rules on me' not 'they had a rules on me'.

    Otherwise nice work! 9/10

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