MS KRISTY'S HOMEWORK - practice 5.
Narrowed topic: My brother Alberto
Controlling idea: is smart and a successful person.
Topic sentence: He never give up in one of his goal.
Alberto is my second brother. I really admire him because he is very smart, and a successful person. Since he stared to go school, and when he discovered what really wanted he never stop it. Now, he has a career and I'm very proud of him. Every day I saw him doing his homework, many times until the midnight. There were days that he didn't eat anything, even more many times he didn't sleep very well. I remember that when my mom saw him, she just got very worried. One day she told him - if you don't eat anything you're going to get sick, and he just said - don't worried mom is for a good reason. Now she's very proud of him, and the rest of the family too. He always worked in what he is now - a mechany ingeneer.
Narrowed topic: A time when I wasn't in control.
Controlling idea: Many times I can't control my anger.
Topic sentence: I do a fool things everytime that I get angry.
Many times is too difficult to get along with my anger. For example - three weeks ago like every morning at 6:00 am before I get to start to work, I have to go first to the stool deparment and just to get what I going to need. That day there were a few workers after me, and it took me a few minutes to get my tools. After that,when I started to work one of my work partner came to me and told me - I need this material, can you bring it to me? Yes, just give me a few minutes I said. Then a few minutes later my supervisor came to me and told me with an angry voice - what is happening you don't look the clock, is thirty minutes later and you are just getting started. Where were you, your partner is waiting for material - I know he just told me I said, and then I had a big argument with him. I got very angry and I did something fool - I just ran away from my job, I don't know what I was thinking. The next day I was more relaxed, and I showed up in my jod. I thought that they were to going to fire me, but that didn't happeng, they just gave me a warning. That day I wasn't in control.
Narrowed topic: An act of courage.
Controlling idea: Courage is the meaning of persevere.
Topic idea: To follow our goals, we need the courage to get them.
One of my goal is to go to the college and get a degree. But of course I need of this word - courage. I can say that I want to do this or I want to get that, but If I don't have the courage to do it, all my words go away and see my goals just disappear. I want to be a successful person and get a career just like my brother Alberto. I know that is not going to be easy. I know too that I have to work very hard, just like him. With an act of courage, I can make this dream come true. I heard people say - when you want something there are many obstacles to get trought. But only the wisdon people say - any obstacle is impossible, with an act of courage you can trought it.
PRACTICE 6.
Paragraph 1.
Main or controlling idea is: Such stories reveal a mysterious and sometimes profound bond between animals and humans.
The interesting topic sentence is: The parrot screamed loudly until Mr. Becker's wife awoke and call 911.
Paragraph 2.
Main or controlling idea is: Therefore, when an irresistible photo opportunity arises, the digital photographer is more likely to have a camera handy, tucked in a pocket or handbag.
The interesting topic sentence is: The digital photographer can see instantly whether a shot is good and then snap more pictures if necessary.